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Let's write some Haikus!!! Rules for this page: all posts and comments must follow a haiku's 5-7-5 syllable format. Have fun!

30 comments:

  1. In the winter winds
    A sparrow surged in silence
    and pooped white egg yolk.

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  2. Foolish endeavors
    Hopeless journeys into dark
    Childhood fantasy

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    1. Time soon filtered through
      Children became seasoned men
      Dark became darker

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  3. Suspenseful silence
    A siren distantly blares
    Ashes fall like snow

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  4. You guys need to post
    This is pathetic, come on!
    More posts, or no fun

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    1. Don't get on their nerves.
      Haiku's can be difficult.
      Perhaps they aren't skilled.

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  5. A green tidal wave
    Lashed back in upon itself,
    Splashing as it came.

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    1. Thrashing and churning
      The green surge swelled in its hate,
      Leaving love behind.

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    2. A mist rose and fell
      Lifting green into light pink
      Swaying and dancing

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    3. Fear rose to a peak,
      The shadows loomed in silence.
      Darkness flashes green

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    4. Suddenly swimming
      A horse carried the darkness
      Choking on water

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    5. In colder waters
      The minnow flows in pure peace
      Searching for answers.

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  6. This is serious
    A case of haiku wars that
    Shall end in the grave

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    1. This too is sincere:
      Haiku wars that end in death
      Were fought by wusses

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    2. If not felled by death
      Shall haiku wars continue
      For eternity?

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    3. While words still exist
      So will the foolish wielders
      Spewing words of hate

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    4. Do not dismiss hate
      For it can fuel actions
      That change the world

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  7. Gasping and crying
    Suffocating from failure
    And slowly dying

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    1. Let it snow, not rain
      The fire is slowly dying
      But there is joy still

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    2. Let the flurries fall
      So beautiful they grace Earth
      Spreading Christmas cheer

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    3. The Christmas tree falls
      Engulfed in fire, tongues of flame
      Sam's presents are ash

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    4. And from the ashes
      A bit of charred ribbon flew,
      Detached from its gift

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    5. The wrapping paper
      Painted with reindeer and trees
      Has withered away

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    6. We wish for it to
      Reappear into thin air
      But none can be done

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  8. Foolish endeavor
    A child follows a man's steps
    While man follows child

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    1. Liam, check again.
      Line two has eight syllables.
      It's good, nonetheless!

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    2. Child has one vowel...
      How is it two syllables??
      I don't really care.

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  9. I don't write haikus;
    At least not very often;
    See? It really shows!

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    1. Christian, it's not hard
      Just write some nonsense and make -
      sure it's this format!

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  10. Little Drummer Boy
    He now marches off to war
    Little boy no more

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